That was simply amazing. I really enjoyed the story and how it was presented. The music fit the mood of the animation. I hope you'll put the tracks in its own cd. The only thing I could ask for is if this was remade with a more hand style drawn animation(not saying that what was here was bad).
The music comes straight from the band June Madrona; I asked to get their music without vocal tracks and they generously agreed. Most of the songs used came from their latest album. That album also has a song called "Would you rather fly or be invisible?" that almost got used for the credit sequence.
Any way, blah blah, their music is great. You can listen to some for free on their website or buy it at the store at bicyclerecords.com. The Moon Diary DVD is also there. If you want to know which album a particular song is from you can pm me.
it has potential
I feel this could have benefitted from better voice acting. Sometimes it felt like there wasn't much emotion in the voices. Everything seemed bland. When this happend the impact and effect of the reveal and setup lost a lot of its effect as emotional and serious. You can convey mockery and sadness within the whispers but i don't think being as subtle as possible within the voices really conveys that sense of sadness/ mockery. With that said the idea is good. Nothing particularly bad about the animation. Keep working at it. There is potential here for an excellent animation.
great animation.....script uuuuhhhhhh
the animation was great. the chaning of body parts rotating into the foreground looked incredible awesome. One gripe about the animation is the way facil expressions don't change all that much. biggest problem with the the animation was probably the script. This could be because maybe some of the lines were deliverd kinda blandly or due to some of the cliche lines. "why walk when you can roll".........i think a better line could have been something simpler like...."we'll take my car"
loved the atmosphere...hated the percision
I really enjoyed the camera angles atmosphere. They were the the factors that kept me going the most. Even when when I knew there weren't any monsters around I was still freaked out. Took me back to the days of the original resident evil games. But like the resident evil games, the game becomes frustrating when percision movement and judgement are required(which is a good chunk of the game). A game like this should be more suited to a sort of psuedo point and click adventure game. Keep at it. I look forward to seeing what comes next.
That was some fantastic work. The blending of voice acting, narration, background ambience, and script create such a wonderful atmosphere. You make a great story teller.
Oh, thank you. Thank you for such a nice review. It was fun creating this. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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